| Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) | |
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How is it? | I LOVE IT | | 33% | [ 1 ] | You can't write very good | | 0% | [ 0 ] | It was nice | | 0% | [ 0 ] | I want more! Write some more! | | 0% | [ 0 ] | I don't care either way cause you rock! | | 67% | [ 2 ] | It sucked! Get a life | | 0% | [ 0 ] | Um | | 0% | [ 0 ] |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Mon Mar 24, 2008 12:45 pm | |
| Name: Kisa Ravenson
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Species: Vampire
Hair: Chin length, black, heavy bangs that partly cover her eyes
Eyes: Dark Grey/Black
Build: Slender, 5'3"
Family: Mother is a drug addict, father is an alcoholic, older brother is in jail for attempted murder on my life, and my little brother is in a coma from being beat up after school.
History: Age zero. I'm in the hospital. Mama is unconcious. My daddy is holding me and mama. The nurse is taking pictures of us three. Terrance did not come to the hospital with mama and daddy because he is in school. My older brother is sixteen. The walls were white. So was the nurse's uniform, my mama's dress, and the sheets. There's blood still all over the sheets. I was a little pink thing, no bigger than my mama's forearm. My mouth was closed, but my eyes were open, staring up at the new, white world. My eyes are black as night. Daddy is cooing at me. He tickles my tiny pink foot. I am still silent. The nurse smiles. Mama finally wakes up and holds me. Kisa, she murmurs in my ear. She is very pretty. Hair as yellow as the sun, down to her shoulders. She looks at me lovingly with blue eyes. I realize that I am happy to have such a pretty mama. Of course, my daddy is very handsome. His hair is thick and black and crazy. And his eyes are green like moss. No one knows where I got my black eyes from. But I have my daddy's black hair. I reach up for him, making a tiny grunt. He gently picks me up in the crook of his arm, smiling. His teeth are pearly white. I grab his pinkie finger and hold on tight. It's the only way to tell him I love him. But my stomache makes a sound. Everyone hears it, and they laugh. I giggle, too. Daddy gives me back to mama so I can be fed for the first time in my life. When we go back home a few days later, I meet my brother Terrance. He has my mama's beautiful blonde hair. He stares at me with my daddy's moss green eyes, unsmiling. I coo. Daddy asks me what he thinks of me. My brother calls me a word I don't understand. Ugly. He is scolded by both mama and daddy, then sent to his room. He goes without a word... | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:26 am | |
| Nice
(hey do you like Admin's avatar??) | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:30 am | |
| sure it rox but not as much as mine | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:39 am | |
| ha sure but mine's even better | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:44 am | |
| No! *growl* I'll fight you to see who has the better avvie! *sound of tiger attacking it's prey* | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:49 am | |
| hah yea RAWR!! i'm a monkey. FEAR ME!! | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:55 am | |
| MONKEYS SUCK DOLPHINS ARE THE WAVE OF THE FUTURE IF YOU GO TO DARK BLISS COVEN, AND CLICK ON THE FOREST, MY LAST POST IN THERE IS ABOUT A DREAM LAST NIGHT except instead of the demon, it was clay vanderbeek chasing me but i really did have that dream last nite | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:04 am | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:06 am | |
| its my fav dream because little pink butterflies kill clay | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:15 am | |
| That's nice. I had a scary dream that i was molested, and i'm serious. It was frightening. | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:19 am | |
| u have odd dreams poppit
i had a dream that clay tried to make out with me, then he killed me
and then sanchez came in a little suit and killed him
it was cute/terrible/funny | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:26 am | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:30 am | |
| once i had a dream where my mom and i went to the circus, and an evil clown made a little stuffed bat that came alive and started multiplying, then they ate everyone and the clown took over te world. i have that dream once a year, and thats why i dont like clowns | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:34 am | |
| hah
i had a dream that i was in this mall place with Otis, from this show on Nick Back at the Barnyard. Then for some reason i was at ur house, and they were like robbing it. So i stopped him, by heating up a ffrying pan and hitting him. Then you woke up and said,"what is a cow doing in my house Joce?" i smiled and then i woke up!! | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:39 am | |
| i had a dream once that my cat kizzy was killing me by strangling, then i woke up, and he was sitting on my chest | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:51 am | |
| scary.. i had a dream that the pigs from ANimal Farm were flying and had guns, and were shooting me | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 7:55 am | |
| oh my god no way i had that same dream after i read that book it was creepy but my fav dream was when elmo was killing people theres something u need to watch on youtube, it's like, elmo kills barney and its really funny | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:03 am | |
| ..kool. Hey isn't animal farm like...gross/creepy/weird/messedup? | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:05 am | |
| all of the above i hated that book it was so weird i hated watership down too and tom sawyer now im reading waiting for the rain and its okay | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:11 am | |
| The kidz @ my skool are reading Tom sawyer. they hated it, but they hated the movie more. hah | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:39 am | |
| we watched the movie from like 1938 or something and it was awesome the guy who played Sid was like a miniature devil | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 2:59 pm | |
| ur new avvie rox ass but mine is still better | |
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Hazel
Posts : 93 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 5:49 pm | |
| lol thanks, i tought my other one was too....cool to be me. so i found a more innocentish one. | |
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Kisa
Posts : 58 Join date : 2008-03-24 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Kisa... The Black Flower (edited but not yet done) Tue Mar 25, 2008 5:51 pm | |
| yeah it is btw i think chris's character got layed | |
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